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A cherry wood box.
The smell of sweat pea.
Shattering of glass over head.
Please, father, no more.
Saltwater drops.
Blurring ink.
An emptiness.
The pain is not yours alone.
Angry words.
Terrible images.
Then quiet once more.
Three times over again, round and round we go.
An empty surprise.
Longing, reaching fingers.
Left uselessly.
Forgotten.
The smell of sweat pea.
Shattering of glass over head.
Please, father, no more.
Saltwater drops.
Blurring ink.
An emptiness.
The pain is not yours alone.
Angry words.
Terrible images.
Then quiet once more.
Three times over again, round and round we go.
An empty surprise.
Longing, reaching fingers.
Left uselessly.
Forgotten.
This might just be vague enough to be considered good.
:l;;;;
Anyway, this is Legato's past.
Shitty poetry is shitty. :'D;;;
:l;;;;
Anyway, this is Legato's past.
Shitty poetry is shitty. :'D;;;
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not really bad poetry, the ambiguous makes it that much more interesting
...child abuse? discipline? (is randomly guessing the dark story behind these words)
...child abuse? discipline? (is randomly guessing the dark story behind these words)